Unfortunately, this one wasn't working for me. I had to dnf at 20% due to the cheesiness, for lack of a better term, of the dialog and representation of bdsm. Even if the whole dom/sub portrayal was more believable, the use of the terms "babe, dude, man, etc." were enough to drive me batty. Maybe they were used to show how young these guys were, or maybe I'm just getting old.
The story had potential, and I liked certain aspects of it but, I just couldn't manage to maintain interest in this story.