No problems with the writing in this short story, mostly just with the finer points that I questioned as the story went on. Are people actually able to fall asleep upright in chairs like that? What took these two so long to get together, long enough that they realize they love each other after having sex? Little questions seemed to be popping up for me as the story went on. But, it fit the prompt very well, and I liked how the blurb was used in the story.