I enjoyed most of this story. It is almost one long scene, with some parts that were hot as hell, and parts that were just a bit so so for me namely the spanking scene). Zach did come across as a bit whiney at times, but I think that is mostly due to his age and maturity level. Taylor and Zach were great together. I would love to read a back story on their relationship and maybe even one in the future showing how these three are making out.